Talk:Anne of Green Gables (2008 audio drama)/@comment-4934571-20160926143431/@comment-3493059-20160927125535

I just had a go at editing them, and you can see the changes here. There weren't any big errors, just places where the syntax was a little out of whack or the sentence could be phrased to read more smoothly.

You wrote "in the meantime" at the start of the Episode 2. Does this mean "since the last episode"? "In the meantime" sounds like we were paying attention to someone else's story, and now we're back to Anne's. So I changed it to "since arriving", because I think it makes more sense in context.